Too Big For Their Boots

Sunday, July 13th, 2008

Once upon a time, there was an online bookseller. It started out when the Internet was emerging as one of the major advancements in human communication of all time. As the online bookseller grew, it began to try to change the rules to its own advantage. It was a business after all, with ‘making money’ its main goal. One day, the online bookseller thought, if we can control the production as well as the sales function, we can make even more money. Let’s deny our production competitors access to our sales channel! We will win!!

Sadly, this is not a fairy tale.

For more info about how to slow down the giant and enable more competition in print-on-demand production, see:

http://www.spannet.org/amazonantitrust-home.htm

Current Issues: Eating Disorders — In Fiction?

Friday, June 20th, 2008

I’m close to continuing work on the next book in the Sadhu Singh/Taylor Franke series. The new book is called Starving For Life, the story of Pauline Granger, a recovering anorexic who is caught up in the murder of a department store guard.

I was reading a blog, The Fictionistas, and came across a related article, pointing out the range of eating disorders that exist today, not just for girls, but for people in general. It is worth a read:

http://fictionistas.blogspot.com/2008/06/disordered-eatingits-not-just-for.html

I would be interested if you think a novel that has a character who has had an eating disorder is a draw or not. Do you know of any other YA or adult fiction that has such a character? Comments please.

The Plot Thickens

Friday, June 20th, 2008

Every once in a great while, someone lays it all out there and lightbulbs go off like you’re in Yankee Stadium. If you are a writer, this post by Nathan Bransford is one of those:

http://nathanbransford.blogspot.com/2008/06/do-you-have-plot.html

He defines, compares and contrasts three of the biggies of fiction:

  • theme
  • hook
  • plot

We all need them, but we often miss the mark when asked to share them with a prospective agent or publishers. At least us newbs do. I’m sure the published authors have them well in hand. The comments by his readers are well worth a look, too.

Technical Difficulties

Saturday, May 24th, 2008

You know, this techno stuff is starting to show wear and tear. A couple weeks ago, the webhost for this blog seemed to ‘lose’ me in domain space, at least for my website. Then my email wouldn’t work. Then their live-chat help desk was unreachable.

Yesterday and today the network between their servers and the world, at least their hosting servers, disappeared. That was the full set: email, blogs, websites — the whole kit and kaboodle. Their company site was up, though, and their live-chat support desk. Every couple hours, I checked them again. ‘few minutes’ turned into ’several hours’ turned into ‘no eta’. Right now it’s back up. Anyone care to guess the odds on for how long?

Email seems to be trickling in. It’s probably all backed up on sending servers that have now started trying to send again.

[sigh] Just needed to vent.

Film Review - Charlie Wilson’s War

Friday, May 9th, 2008

[Originally posted - 1 February 2008]

What does it mean when you feel guilty laughing in a movie? It means you’re an American who understands the impact of the story’s historical events on the present.

Charlie Wilson’s War (Mike Nichols, 2008) elicits just such mixed emotions. Previewed Monday, 21 January 2007, at the Jam Factory, Melbourne, the based-on-truth story relates the actions of a virtually unknown U.S. Congressman of Texas, Charlie Wilson (Tom Hanks), who built a most unlikely coalition to fund the mujahidin during the Soviet invasion of Afghanistan in the early 1980s. Wilson was the first civilian honored by the CIA for valor in covert operations: getting the Soviets to withdraw from Afghanistan.

Starring Tom Hanks as Wilson, Julia Roberts as his well-heeled Texas matron ‘love’ interest, and Phillip Seymour Hoffman as a mid-level CIA operative Gust Avrakotos, Charlie Wilson’s War exposes the inner wheeling and dealing of Congress, money, and international spy organizations. The banter between Hanks and Hoffman exposed the irreverence with which those in power held (hold?) the fate of the world in their hands.

One scene that leaves the viewer in shock is Charlie and Gust’s sit-down in Jerusalem with a ‘friendly’ Mosad agent. Charlie manages to convince their Israeli companion to release the largest store of Soviet arms for use by the ‘freedom fighters’, and to cooperate with not only Pakistan, but also Egypt and the panoply of Muslim nations, including Saudi Arabia, to support the resistance. Saudi matches the US black ops appropriation dollar for dollar, allowing Wilson to increase an initial $5 million budget to $1 billion. Goes to prove that the enemy of my enemy may also be my enemy - or however that saying goes - no matter what the cost.

The sad aspect of the film is the final Defense Appropriations committee meeting when Charlie asks for continued support of just $1 million to rebuild the country. If you are going to see the film, and I do highly recommend it, suffice it to say that the chickens came home to roost, and 90% of the world is dealing with the negative and short-sighted outcome of that meeting. One could argue that the seed for 9/11 was planted right then. Lessons have not been learned, and perhaps they never will be.

Cinematically, the images are a mix of old news footage of the era, grand vistas and refugee tent cities filmed in the deserts of Morocco, glam and glitter in Washington and Texas power circles. Disturbing shots of Soviet migs strafing and helicopters firing rockets on the defenseless Afghani women and children are confronting, especially since what happened then repeated a mere twenty years later. The impact of the film is intense.

Laughter can break tension. Screenplay writer Aaron Sorkin (West Wing) and legend director Mike Nichols (The Odd Couple, Plaza Suite, Spamalot) have created a sardonic entertainment, not just a re-creation of a little known backgrounder to the current nightmare we are living with today.

No brainer - we all must support action to Stop Global Climate Change. Or Is It?

Friday, May 9th, 2008

[Originally published - 28 January 2008]

[I apologize to those who left comments on this posting. Those are totally gone as far as I can tell.]

I’ve been grappling with an explanation for my instinctual response to the necessity to have a public policy to stop Global Climate Change. Here’s a logical explanation. And if you’re reading this post and want to spread the word, please do.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zORv8wwiadQUPDATE: if you want a bit of giggle cleverness instead, and have 10 minutes to spare, pick this one:

How It All Ends

UPDATE 2: if you want a counter argument to the logic above see:

No, It’s Not. Yes, It Is.

Whoo-hoo! One step closer…

Friday, May 9th, 2008

[Originally published 16 January 2008]

Sometimes email is just crap. But today it held something special: a notice from Amazon that my novel, The Truck: a baby-boomer nostalgia murder mystery, has made it to the next stage of the Amazon Breakout Novel Awards. Here’s the message:

Thank you for participating in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award. We received thousands of submissions and were impressed by the incredible talent and creativity seen in the entries. We are happy to inform you that you have been selected as a semi-finalist.

You can find your entry on Amazon.com via the following link: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00121WDVA, and access the main contest page where all entries are located at www.amazon.com/abna

Please note that we are continuing to update semi-finalist detail pages with any custom cover images that were submitted, editorial reviews, and other minor changes. These changes will appear online in the next few days.

Now that you’re a semi-finalist, feel free to encourage friends and family to review yours and others’ entries. The three customers who provide the most high quality reviews will be qualified to win one of three customer prizes, including an Amazon kindle reader, $2000 in Amazon gift card value, and an HP photo printer. Learn more at www.amazon.com/abna.

Good luck!

So, dear reader, friend, colleague, or even complete stranger who got here by complete fluke, I do hope you take the time to help me reach the next stage. To do that, go to: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00121WDVA, download the story and rate it . The download button is at the top right of the page and the rating is about 2/3 down the page.

You will need an Amazon account. I don’t think you have to buy anything, just sign up. Click on the Rating number and the Go button and you will be asked to sign up if you don’t already have an Amazon account. If you want to write a review and you’re not already a customer, you may need to make a purchase, but I don’t know that for sure.
I had to sneak a peek again and my first review is there!!! Here’s what CF Neist said about The Truck:

A suspenseful read with well-drawn characters, The Truck arouses emotions of fear and anguish within the first paragraph. Set on a farm way out in the boonies in the 1970s, it reminded me of the song “Ode to Billy Jo”, which imparts a similar feeling of angst and despair. The opening pages, depicting a fourteen-year-old girl being forced by her father to dig a grave for her dead boyfriend, were tense and heart rending. Having grabbed our attention with this seminal scene, Jan Whitaker skilfully takes us back in time to discover just what brought the family to this point - and why. Let’s have more from this writer!

This is so emotional. I never expected it to feel like this! Thank you, CF Neist! Folks, I don’t even recognise this person’s name. Wow!

Here’s the link once more: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00121WDVA

Oh, and tell your friends. The more the merrier!

Jan

Sad, sad, sad

Friday, May 9th, 2008

[Originally published 9 January 2008]
The blog world is amazing. This one is just plain sad.
http://andrewolmsted.com/

Nanny state — on the move again

Friday, May 9th, 2008

[Originally published 9 January 2008]
A few years ago, before the turn of the century, some bright sparks in the Australian government had the idea to filter the whole internet coming into and moving traffic around in Australia. A bunch of us spoke up and stopped much of the insanity. But in the words of a cute little blonde girl sitting in front of a TV in a movie 15 or so years before that: They’re Ba-ack. Only now ‘they’ is Senator Stephen Conroy of the new Labor Government.
I dubbed the first guy who tried this Senator Dick. His first name was Richard. This new one is now Senator Con. Different party, same lame-brained idea.

Today, in the Australian IT section, an article was published in the opinion section supporting this daft idea.

http://www.australianit.news.com.au/story/0,24897,23021828-5013038,00.html

Here is my comment they published [slightly edited from what I sent]:

Ms McMenamin will isolate herself and her supporters unless she moderates her language and focuses on measures that will have some genuine impact on the perpetrators of child pornography.

It is not technically feasible for ISP filtering to block particular categories of content, and it’s irrelevant to cite figures claiming blocked attempts to access such material.

The accusation that opponents of this silly idea are “extreme”, and supportive of child abuse, is unfounded and unfair.

People like myself who don’t believe in government control over what we can or cannot access, read, or see, are not extreme. We believe in our own ability to judge our own actions.

Certainly, it seems the government does not intend to limit filtering to child pornography: according to this article http://www.news.com.au/story/0,23599,22989028-421,00.html, it plans to extend mandatory filtering to “online pornography and violent websites”.

Under the circumstances, it is very disappointing that Child Wise has taken such an illogical approach to the important task of protecting children from harm.

Jan Whitaker
Board member
Australian Privacy Foundation

Here is what I sent:

Unfortunately, Ms McMenamin is only believing what her agenda allows her to believe with regard to how filtering ‘works’. Her facts of effectiveness, just counting access stops, are not relevant. How does blocking stop demand [her word]?

Secondly, the proposal is to allow opt out of the filtering. Well, guess who is going to opt out — done guessing yet? The child pornographers. Does that stop the dreaded practice then? Of course not.

The government does not limit their filtering to child pornography, but according to an article from News Ltd, December 31, 2007 12:05am
http://www.news.com.au/story/0,23599,22989028-421,00.html, it would extend to “online pornography and violent websites”.

It’s very important that organisations work to protect children against harm. So it’s very disappointing that Child Wise has damaged its reputation by writing such a vitriolic and illogical article.

It is technically INfeasible for ISP filtering to block particular categories of content. And the further suggestion that it will somehow, magically reduce the abuse of children is fanciful.

The accusations that opponents of a silly idea are “extreme”, and are supportive of child abuse, is unfounded and unfair. People like myself who don’t believe in government control over what I can or cannot access, read, or see, are not extreme. We just believe in our own ability to judge our own actions.

Ms McMenamin will isolate herself and her supporters unless she moderates her language, and focusses on measures that will have some genuine impact on the perpetrators of child pornography.

Jan Whitaker
Australian Privacy Foundation Board member

I like mine a bit better. At least it makes orderly sense.

If you are like me and hate to see governments waste our taxdollars, here is Senator Stephen Conroy’s address:

senator.conroy@aph.gov.au

Keeping Track of Queries and other assorted writing activities

Friday, May 9th, 2008

[Originally published 5 January 2008]

Do you ever wonder what you’ve really been doing with your writing?Here’s a trick I use. Since I usually send queries by email, I use email folders. You can create a folder for sentqueries and one for queryreplies. I also have folders for crits for each wip that is out for crit. When I get an email back on a query, it goes in the reply file. When I get a crit, it goes in the corresponding crit folder.

Hope this helps someone.